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PostSubject: Alexander veraro   Alexander veraro I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 12, 2009 11:34 am

Name:Alexander veraro

Age:18

Power:Can manipulate plant life

Occupation:Highschool graduate

Side:Neutral

Personality:He feels as if he can't rely on anyone he hates it when he is told what to do by someone he doesn't know.

Appearnce:in avy

Bio:Hi my name is alexander veroro i have sort of a roman accent but bear with my english is good. I was only about 7 when i first discuvered meh special gift. I can control plant life. Many thought i wuz a monster but thatz wuzn't the case. I wuz tortured and threatened after school by some bulliez and i hav no idea why they did that to me but one day they went to far which is why i am blind. I can only zee stuff when i amz around dirt soil and grass mainly a forest or a feild. People like Proffessor X and the brotherhood asked me to join them but i turned them down i am only going to stick up for myself. People say when you loose one of your senses your other ones become stronger and that helped me throughout mylife. I thought having the X gene was pretty awesomez till i heard how people treated others with it. But that affected me in no way at all i never really got to know my family or my parents because i was only 2 when my whole family lefted me. I cried everyday till now at the age i am 18 i stopped and became who i was held back in becoming... A person.

Stats:

two 50's and the rest 30 or below or three 40's and the rest 25 and below.


Attack:30
Stanima:25
Control:25
Speed:40
Intelligence:35
Will:25
Stleath:35
Persuasiveness:30


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PostSubject: Re: Alexander veraro   Alexander veraro I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 12, 2009 11:44 am

ok theres just a few things I want to point out

1) You say you can manipulate plant life but in the bio it shows that you have accelrated healing like Logan so wich is it.

2) You say your neutral but you live at a mansion with others like you? sorry ut that sounds like Xaviers mansion to me

3) spread your stats around a little more.
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander veraro   Alexander veraro I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 14, 2009 3:04 pm

sorry i was looking at others bio's for some ideas on this one
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander veraro   Alexander veraro I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 14, 2009 3:05 pm

It's enormously long, just cut out the parts that she doesnt like
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander veraro   Alexander veraro I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 14, 2009 3:17 pm

is that better
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander veraro   Alexander veraro I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 14, 2009 3:20 pm

looks good to me
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander veraro   Alexander veraro I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 14, 2009 3:21 pm

Looking good
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PostSubject: Re: Alexander veraro   Alexander veraro I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 14, 2009 3:39 pm

Ok your good

put your stats in your siggy
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